Evaluation Report
Detailed analysis and feedback for Sample Test ID: SAMPLE-001
📊 Final Summary Evaluation
Overall Marks
104.3/250
General Feedback
The student demonstrates a commendable depth of knowledge across a wide range of UPSC topics, showcasing strong awareness of current affairs, government schemes, and relevant committees. Answers are generally well-structured, multi-dimensional, and effectively utilize diagrams to enhance clarity. The ability to provide specific examples and engage in critical analysis is a significant strength. However, a pervasive and critical area for improvement is the consistent failure to adhere to word limits, which impacts conciseness and time management. This often leads to a lack of precision in data points, occasional factual inaccuracies, and minor grammatical errors. While conceptual clarity is largely good, there are instances where a deeper, more nuanced understanding of specific technical or policy details is required.
Strategic Recommendations
Master Word Limit Adherence: This is the most critical area. Practice rigorous self-editing to convey maximum information within the prescribed word count, focusing on keywords and concise phrasing. This will significantly improve time management in the actual exam.
Prioritize Factual Precision and Accuracy: Double-check all data, specific names of committees, schemes, and scientific facts. Avoid including information that is not directly relevant or factually incorrect, as this can lead to negative marking.
Refine Language and Grammatical Accuracy: Dedicate time to proofreading for grammatical errors, typos, and awkward sentence structures. Clear, precise, and error-free language enhances readability and professionalism.
Deepen Conceptual Nuance for Technical/Policy Questions: For questions involving complex technologies (e.g., CAR-T vs. CRISPR) or specific government plans (e.g., National Agriculture Disaster Management Plan), ensure a thorough and accurate understanding of their mechanisms, limitations, and specific components.
Craft Impactful and Specific Conclusions: Move beyond generic summaries. Aim for forward-looking conclusions that offer concrete policy recommendations, reiterate the answer's core argument, or link to broader developmental goals, directly addressing the question's implications.
Question 1: What are the different dimensions of food security? Examine India's status in terms of ensuring food security with regard to these dimensions. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4 / 10
(40.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clearly identifies FAO's four dimensions of food security.
- Provides relevant government schemes and current data for each dimension, highlighting both positives and negatives.
- Mentions the Shanta Kumar Committee and links to SDG-1 in the way forward.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- Data points, while present, sometimes lack precision or specific sources (e.g., '78% rice & grain').
- The answer significantly exceeds the 150-word limit, impacting conciseness.
- Minor grammatical errors ('ensurity', 'coveres') need correction.
Introduction
Clearly defines dimensions, setting a strong context. Thesis directly addresses the question's first part effectively.
Body Analysis
Comprehensive coverage of all four dimensions with India's status (positives/negatives). Uses relevant schemes and data, though some data points lack precision (e.g., '78% rice & grain'). Logical flow is maintained, but the extensive detail exceeds word limits, impacting conciseness and requiring sharper articulation.
Conclusion
Effectively summarizes with a forward vision, linking to SDG-1 and relevant policy recommendations like strengthening PDS.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram clearly delineates FAO's four dimensions of food security, enhancing the introduction's clarity and providing a strong visual foundation for the subsequent discussion.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Latest NFHS-5 data for nutrition indicators (e.g., stunting, wasting).
- Specific government schemes for pulses/millets (e.g., National Food Security Mission for Pulses).
- Recent Economic Survey data on food subsidies or PDS reforms.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Discussing the role of federalism in PDS implementation and challenges.
- Ethical considerations of food wastage amidst widespread hunger.
Question 2: Modern technologies such as blockchain and ChatGPT are powerful tools with immense potential to transform agriculture into an more efficient and sustainable sector. Discuss in the context of India. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.5 / 10
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Provides excellent, specific Indian examples for both ChatGPT/AI (ICRISAT, PLANTIX, Mission Saagu Baagu) and Blockchain (Whrrl, Indiachain, SVAMITVA, eNAM, PM KISAN).
- Clearly demonstrates how these technologies enhance efficiency and sustainability in agriculture.
- Well-structured with distinct sections for each technology.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The answer significantly exceeds the 150-word limit, requiring more concise writing.
- The conclusion, while insightful, could be more directly tailored to agricultural transformation.
- Minor grammatical errors ('As pere Accenture', 'med in 30%') need attention.
Introduction
Effectively introduces modern technologies' potential in agriculture with a relevant economic impact statistic, setting a clear and strong context for the discussion.
Body Analysis
Provides excellent, specific examples for both ChatGPT/AI (ICRISAT, PLANTIX, Mission Saagu Baagu) and Blockchain (Whrrl, Indiachain, SVAMITVA, eNAM, PM KISAN). Demonstrates strong conceptual depth in linking technologies to efficiency and sustainability, but the detail exceeds word limits, impacting conciseness.
Conclusion
The CJ Chandrachud quote, while insightful on justice, could have been more directly tailored to the agricultural transformation and sustainability aspects.
Diagram Analysis
The flowcharts effectively categorize and illustrate the diverse applications of ChatGPT/AI and Blockchain in agriculture, significantly enhancing the clarity and structure of the body.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mentioning specific challenges like the digital divide, data privacy concerns, or the need for farmer training.
- Reference to the Agri-Stack initiative for digital agriculture.
- Specific examples of how these technologies contribute to climate resilience.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Ethical implications of AI in decision-making (e.g., crop failure predictions).
- Governance challenges in implementing tech solutions across diverse farmer demographics.
Question 3: What factors have led to the recent acceleration in the trend towards de-dollarization of the global economy? Do you think the dollar will lose its dominance anytime soon? (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.5 / 10
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Provides a precise and comprehensive definition of de-dollarization.
- Offers a comprehensive list of factors driving de-dollarization, including geopolitical tensions and multilateral initiatives.
- Critically analyzes the dollar's continued dominance with strong supporting data (Forex reserves, trade settlements, political alliances).
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The answer significantly exceeds the 150-word limit, requiring more concise writing.
- Minor grammatical errors ('tensiong', 'inereak') need correction.
- Could briefly mention the challenges faced by alternative currencies.
Introduction
Provides a precise and comprehensive definition of de-dollarization, clearly establishing the scope and context for the subsequent analysis of factors and future trends.
Body Analysis
Offers a comprehensive list of factors driving de-dollarization, including geopolitical tensions and multilateral initiatives. Critically analyzes the dollar's continued dominance with strong supporting data (Forex reserves, trade settlements, political alliances), demonstrating multi-dimensionality. The extensive detail, however, exceeds word limits.
Conclusion
Concludes with a pragmatic, forward-looking recommendation for India to strategically engage with the de-dollarization trend, acknowledging associated risks.
Diagram Analysis
The flowchart effectively categorizes the factors contributing to de-dollarization and the arguments for the dollar's continued dominance, aiding in structured understanding.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Specific data on increasing non-dollar trade settlements (e.g., India-UAE Rupee-Dirham trade).
- Mentioning BRICS currency initiatives or challenges to Renminbi's global acceptance.
- Historical context of currency dominance shifts.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Geopolitical implications of a multi-polar currency system and its impact on global power dynamics.
- Impact on India's economic sovereignty and foreign policy choices in a de-dollarizing world.
Question 4: Despite significant pressure from the developed countries to alter its food subsidy regime, there is merit in India trying to retain its policy support for the poor in the country. Discuss. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.25 / 10
(42.5%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Effectively frames the discussion by acknowledging WTO pressures and India's commitment to food subsidy.
- Presents a robust discussion of merits (PMGKAY, PM KISAN, poverty reduction, food security indicators) and limitations (leakages, fiscal deficit, ecological damage).
- Uses specific data and schemes to support arguments on both sides.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The answer significantly exceeds the 150-word limit, impacting conciseness and requiring tighter phrasing.
- Minor grammatical errors ('agricultured', 'porsly undere') need correction.
- Could briefly mention specific WTO dispute mechanisms or India's stance on 'peace clause'.
Introduction
Effectively frames the discussion by acknowledging WTO pressures and India's commitment to food subsidy, setting a clear context for examining the policy's merits.
Body Analysis
Presents a robust discussion of merits (PMGKAY, PM KISAN, poverty reduction, food security indicators) and limitations (leakages, fiscal deficit, ecological damage) with specific data and schemes. The comprehensive detail, however, significantly exceeds the word limit, impacting conciseness.
Conclusion
Provides a strong, forward-looking conclusion by linking continued support for the poor to the achievement of critical Sustainable Development Goals (SDG-1 & 2).
Diagram Analysis
The flowcharts effectively categorize the merits and limitations of India's food subsidy regime, providing a clear visual structure to the comprehensive discussion.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- WTO dispute settlement mechanisms regarding food subsidies or India's 'peace clause' position.
- Specific recommendations from the Economic Survey on PDS reforms or targeted delivery.
- The role of Farmer Producer Organizations (FPOs) in strengthening food security.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Ethical imperative of food security for vulnerable populations and the concept of 'right to food'.
- Challenges of federalism in implementing welfare schemes and ensuring last-mile delivery.
Question 5: Several initiatives have been taken by the government towards addressing India's water needs, but the issues of water availability and water quality still warrant prioritised intervention. Discuss. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.25 / 10
(42.5%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clearly establishes India's critical water challenge by citing population and resource percentages.
- Provides an exhaustive list of government initiatives (Jal Jeevan, Kisan Sinchai, Namami Gange, Atal Bhujal).
- Critically examines issues of availability (per capita reduction, groundwater depletion) and quality (nitrate, uranium contamination) with strong data.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The answer significantly exceeds the 150-word limit, impacting conciseness and requiring tighter phrasing.
- Minor grammatical errors ('Waterc', 'Sceae ty') need correction.
- Could briefly mention challenges in inter-state water management.
Introduction
Clearly establishes India's critical water challenge by citing population and resource percentages, effectively setting the stage for discussing initiatives and persistent issues.
Body Analysis
Provides an exhaustive list of government initiatives (Jal Jeevan, Kisan Sinchai, Namami Gange) and critically examines issues of availability (per capita reduction, groundwater depletion) and quality (nitrate, uranium contamination) with strong data. The extensive detail, however, exceeds word limits.
Conclusion
Offers a concise, forward-looking conclusion emphasizing the need for conscious policy interventions to achieve SDG-6, reinforcing the answer's core argument.
Diagram Analysis
The flowcharts effectively organize the government initiatives and clearly delineate the issues of water availability and quality, enhancing the answer's structural clarity.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mentioning the Jal Shakti Abhiyan as a comprehensive mission.
- Reference to the draft National Water Policy (2019/2022) for future directions.
- Specific inter-state water dispute mechanisms or tribunals.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Federalism in water resource management and the role of local bodies.
- Climate change impacts on water security and adaptation strategies.
Question 6: What are the major drivers of glacial retreat in the Arctic? Describe the potential impact of the retreat of Arctic glaciers on the ecosystem. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4 / 10
(40.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Good use of WMO data to set context.
- Specific examples like Russian Anthrax outbreak due to permafrost thaw are relevant and demonstrate current awareness.
- Mentions impacts on ocean currents (AMOC) and indigenous populations.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The section on 'Positive Impacts' is fundamentally flawed; economic opportunities are not ecosystem benefits and should be excluded or reframed as human impacts.
- The figure for sea level rise (1cm by 2100) is significantly underestimated for Arctic melt contribution; IPCC projections are much higher.
- Drivers listed are general causes of climate change, not specific to Arctic amplification or local factors like black carbon.
Introduction
Clearly define Arctic-specific drivers like Arctic amplification and albedo effect in the introduction to provide a stronger contextual frame.
Body Analysis
The body effectively lists several drivers of climate change, but lacks precision in linking them specifically to Arctic glacial retreat. While global warming is a root cause, Arctic amplification, black carbon deposition, and changes in ocean currents are more direct drivers. The impacts section includes relevant points like methane emissions from permafrost and disease outbreaks. However, the inclusion of 'positive impacts' like oil exploration and shipping routes demonstrates a misunderstanding of 'ecosystem impact' and weakens the overall argument. The sea level rise figure is inaccurate.
Conclusion
Conclude with a more specific call to action, perhaps mentioning international agreements or scientific initiatives focused on Arctic conservation, rather than a generic SDG-13 reference.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Data: Mention Arctic amplification rates (e.g., warming 2-4 times faster than global average).
- Concepts: Discuss the albedo feedback loop and its role in accelerating melt.
- Reports: Reference the Arctic Council's assessments or UNEP reports on Arctic environment.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Governance: Discuss the role of the Arctic Council and international cooperation frameworks.
- SDGs: Link to SDG 14 (Life Below Water) and SDG 15 (Life on Land) for broader ecosystem impacts.
Question 7: Space tourism, which was viewed as something straight out of a science fiction movie, is now becoming a reality albeit not without hindrances. What are the challenges associated with space tourism? What measures can be taken to address these challenges? (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.5 / 10
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Excellent use of current examples like SpaceX, NASA DAM, ISRO NETRA, JUICE Mission, Chandrayaan, and Artemis.
- Clearly distinguishes between challenges and measures, providing a structured answer.
- Addresses multi-dimensional challenges including safety, environmental impact (carbon footprint), and social inequality.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The point 'Commercialisation of space will reduce welfare application' is more of a societal concern or ethical debate rather than a direct 'challenge' of space tourism itself.
- While 'larger private sector investment' is a measure, its link to 'facilitate wage of public infrastructure' is a bit vague and could be articulated more clearly as a public-private partnership model.
- The answer could briefly touch upon the regulatory vacuum in space tourism.
Introduction
The introduction is strong, effectively setting the stage with relevant industry growth projections and private sector involvement.
Body Analysis
The body provides a comprehensive list of challenges, including human life risks, space debris (with specific data), carbon footprint, and social inequalities. The measures suggested are practical and well-supported by examples of international protocols (Outer Space Treaty) and national initiatives (NASA DAM, ISRO NETRA). The inclusion of renewable modes for missions and utilizing proceeds for R&D and welfare demonstrates a multi-faceted approach. The overall flow is logical, moving from problem identification to concrete solutions.
Conclusion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the current landscape and emphasizes the need for ecological sustainability, providing a forward-looking and balanced perspective.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram effectively categorizes challenges and measures, enhancing the clarity and structure of the answer.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Policy: Mention the need for a dedicated national space law or international regulatory framework for space tourism.
- Ethics: Elaborate on the 'tragedy of the commons' in space and equitable access.
- Technology: Discuss advancements in reusable rocket technology and in-orbit servicing for debris mitigation.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Governance: Discuss the role of UNCOPUOS in developing guidelines for sustainable space activities.
- SDGs: Link to SDG 9 (Industry, Innovation, and Infrastructure) and SDG 12 (Responsible Consumption and Production) for sustainable space development.
Question 8: Global health experts widely believe that the development of CAR-T cell therapy can be a game changer in the treatment of cancer. How can CAR-T cell therapy overcome the limitations of CRISPR-Cas9 technology? (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
3 / 10
(30.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Provides a basic explanation of CAR-T cell therapy's mechanism (genetic engineering of T-cells).
- Correctly identifies CRISPR-Cas9 as a 'genetic scissor technology'.
- Mentions the stringent laboratory conditions required for CRISPR-Cas9 as a valid limitation.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- Several claims regarding CAR-T overcoming CRISPR-Cas9 limitations (e.g., 'low cost and more scalable', 'less side effects') are factually incorrect; CAR-T is extremely expensive and has significant side effects.
- The answer struggles to clearly differentiate between CAR-T (a cell therapy) and CRISPR-Cas9 (a gene-editing tool) in a comparative context.
- The reference to 'Jairam Ramesh Committee' is irrelevant and likely a factual error in this context.
Introduction
Start by briefly defining both CAR-T and CRISPR-Cas9 and their primary applications to establish a clear comparative basis.
Body Analysis
The body attempts to compare CAR-T and CRISPR-Cas9, but the understanding of their respective limitations and advantages is flawed. While CAR-T is a breakthrough, its high cost and severe side effects (like Cytokine Release Syndrome) are major limitations, directly contradicting the claims of 'low cost' and 'less side effects'. The question asks how CAR-T overcomes CRISPR's limitations, but the answer often makes direct comparisons that are not always accurate or relevant to overcoming CRISPR's specific challenges (e.g., off-target edits, delivery mechanisms). The point about stringent lab conditions for CRISPR is valid.
Conclusion
Conclude with a more nuanced statement about the complementary roles of these technologies in cancer treatment, rather than an overly emotional and scientifically imprecise summary.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram helps organize the points but does not compensate for the factual inaccuracies in the body content.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Specific Limitations: Detail CRISPR's limitations like off-target editing, delivery challenges, and potential immunogenicity.
- Mechanism: Explain how CAR-T's ex vivo modification and direct cell infusion bypass some in vivo gene-editing challenges.
- Current Research: Mention ongoing research to combine CRISPR with CAR-T for enhanced precision and safety.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Ethics: Discuss ethical considerations in gene editing and cell therapies.
- Policy: Mention regulatory challenges and approval processes for advanced therapies in India (e.g., ICMR guidelines).
Question 9: Discuss why the rising deployment of new and emerging technologies by prominent violent extremist organizations demand concerted global efforts. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4 / 10
(40.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Provides highly relevant and specific examples of VEOs (ULFA, ISIS, LeT) and technologies (YSMS malware in Pulwama, drones, cryptocurrency, 3D printing, social media).
- Clearly articulates the transnational nature of the threat, necessitating global information sharing and collaborative investment.
- Mentions key international organizations like INTERPOL and FATF, demonstrating awareness of global counter-terrorism architecture.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The point about VEOs using 'AI/ML for monitoring & detecting patterns' is generally inaccurate; AI/ML is primarily used against VEOs by intelligence agencies, not typically by VEOs for their operational patterns.
- While LEMOA and COMCASA are Indo-US military agreements, their direct relevance to countering VEOs' technological deployment could be more explicitly linked or replaced with more direct counter-terrorism cooperation examples.
- The answer could briefly touch upon the dark web's role in technology acquisition and communication.
Introduction
The introduction is effective in immediately establishing the core argument about VEOs leveraging technology and the need for global collaboration.
Body Analysis
The body effectively outlines various emerging technologies exploited by VEOs, from cyber threats and drones to cryptocurrency and 3D manufacturing, with strong examples like the Pulwama attack. It then logically explains why these threats demand global efforts, citing borderless threats, regional stability, and the need for collaborative investment and capacity building. The mention of INTERPOL and FATF is particularly strong. However, the point on AI/ML use by VEOs is questionable, and the military agreements could be better contextualized.
Conclusion
The conclusion effectively reinforces India's push for a Comprehensive Convention on International Terrorism (CCIT), providing a strong policy-oriented closing statement.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram clearly illustrates the technologies used by VEOs and the reasons for global efforts, aiding comprehension.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Specific Technologies: Mention encrypted communication platforms and deepfake technology used for propaganda.
- Reports: Reference UN Counter-Terrorism Committee reports on technology and terrorism.
- Policy: Discuss the role of national CERTs (Computer Emergency Response Teams) in combating cyber threats from VEOs.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Governance: Discuss the challenges of regulating dual-use technologies (e.g., drones, 3D printers) to prevent misuse by VEOs.
- Ethics: Address the ethical dilemmas in surveillance and data collection for counter-terrorism efforts.
Question 10: With the Line of Actual Control (LAC) remaining tense after the Galwan and Yangste incidents and both India and China ramping up infrastructure in the border areas, discuss the role that ITBP plays in the region. (Answer in 150 words)
Max Marks: 10
4.5 / 10
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Excellent contextualization with Galwan and Yangste incidents and infrastructure build-up.
- Provides a comprehensive list of ITBP's roles, including deterrence, patrolling, civil-military cooperation (Operation Pehal, Vibrant Village Programme), and technological integration (AI for translation).
- Critically assesses shortcomings, referencing relevant committees like Shekatkar and Madhukar Gupta, and a Parliamentary Standing Committee report.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The introduction could briefly mention the specific challenges posed by the LAC's undefined nature and harsh terrain, which directly impact ITBP's operations.
- While 'lack of strength and training' is mentioned, it could be elaborated with specific needs (e.g., high-altitude warfare training, specialized equipment).
- The conclusion is a bit generic; it could offer a more specific forward-looking recommendation for ITBP's modernization or strategic role.
Introduction
Strengthen the introduction by briefly highlighting the unique geographical and strategic challenges of the LAC that define ITBP's operational environment.
Body Analysis
The body effectively details the multifaceted role of ITBP, from acting as a deterrent and conducting constant patrolling to fostering civil-military relations through initiatives like the Vibrant Village Programme. The inclusion of AI for Mandarin-to-Hindi translation showcases an awareness of modern technological integration. The critical assessment of shortcomings, backed by references to the Shekatkar and Madhukar Gupta Committees, adds significant depth and analytical rigor, demonstrating a balanced perspective on ITBP's capabilities and areas for improvement.
Conclusion
Conclude with a specific recommendation for ITBP's future, such as enhanced technological integration, specialized training, or greater inter-agency coordination for comprehensive border management.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram clearly separates the roles of ITBP from its shortcomings, providing a well-structured and easy-to-follow analysis.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Specific Challenges: Mention the 'Doklam standoff' as another example of LAC tensions.
- Modernization: Discuss specific equipment needs for high-altitude surveillance and logistics (e.g., drones, specialized vehicles).
- Inter-agency Coordination: Highlight the need for better coordination with the Indian Army and other intelligence agencies.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Governance: Discuss the 'One Border, One Force' policy and its implications for ITBP's role.
- Federalism: Touch upon the coordination challenges between central forces like ITBP and state police in border management.
Question 11: Do you think there is a need for a shift from 'land productivity' to 'irrigation water productivity' in India? Justify your answer. What are the challenges in making this shift? Explain. (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6 / 15
(40.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clearly identifies the need for the shift with relevant data (low land productivity, small holdings, low irrigated area).
- Lists several pertinent challenges like groundwater depletion, menace of subsidies, and heavy dependence on water-intensive crops.
- Provides a 'Way Forward' section with actionable points and relevant committees/schemes (Mihir Sen Committee, Micro Irrigation Infrastructure Fund, PMKSY).
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The justification for the shift could be more robust, linking directly to water scarcity and efficiency.
- Challenges are listed but lack deeper explanation of their impact and interlinkages.
- The 'Way Forward' could be integrated more cohesively with solutions addressing the identified challenges.
Introduction
Clearly state the imperative for shifting focus from land to water productivity due to India's escalating water stress and agricultural inefficiencies.
Body Analysis
The body effectively outlines the need for the shift, citing low land productivity and small landholdings. It then transitions to challenges, mentioning the Vaidyanath Committee and groundwater depletion, which are good points. However, the explanation for each challenge is brief, lacking depth on how these factors impede the shift. For instance, 'Menace of subsidy' is mentioned, but its direct link to water productivity exploitation needs more elaboration. The 'Way Forward' offers good suggestions but could be better structured to directly counter the identified challenges, providing a more coherent problem-solution narrative. Specific gaps: Lack of recent data on water stress indices, detailed impact of climate change on water availability, and specific policy failures.
Conclusion
Reiterate the dual goal of sustainable agriculture and water security, emphasizing a multi-pronged approach for a resilient agricultural future.
Diagram Analysis
No diagram present.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mention NITI Aayog's Composite Water Management Index or specific reports on water scarcity.
- Include examples of successful water-efficient farming practices from states like Maharashtra (Jalyukt Shivar Abhiyan) or Gujarat.
- Reference the 'Per Drop More Crop' component of PMKSY with specific outcomes or targets.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Discuss the federal dimension of water management and inter-state water disputes impacting productivity.
- Link the shift to achieving SDG 6 (Clean Water and Sanitation) and SDG 2 (Zero Hunger) through sustainable agriculture.
Question 12: Examine the role that green hydrogen can play in unlocking the energy security of India. How can the National Green Hydrogen Mission help India in achieving its energy goals? (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.5 / 15
(43.3%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clearly defines Green Hydrogen and its role in clean energy production.
- Effectively outlines multiple roles of Green H2 in energy security, including reducing dependence on fossil fuels and lowering GHG emissions.
- Provides a good list of how the National Green Hydrogen Mission (NGHM) can help, citing specific programs and targets (SIGHT, SHIP, Hydrogen Valley).
- Identifies relevant challenges and offers a 'Way Forward' with policy suggestions.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The connection between Green H2 and India's 500 GW renewable energy target by 2030 could be more explicitly detailed.
- Challenges are listed, but the proposed solutions in 'Way Forward' could be more directly linked to overcoming these specific hurdles.
- The answer could benefit from more quantitative data regarding the NGHM's targets and expected impact.
Introduction
Begin by defining Green Hydrogen as a pivotal clean energy vector and its strategic importance for India's long-term energy independence.
Body Analysis
The body effectively addresses the dual parts of the question. It highlights Green Hydrogen's role in reducing import bills and achieving climate targets, which is good. The section on NGHM's contribution is comprehensive, listing production targets, investment, employment, and R&D initiatives. However, the 'production target of yearly SMMT of Green H2 by 2025' is vague; specific MMT (Million Metric Tonne) targets should be mentioned. The challenges like 'heavy initial investment' and 'lack of scalability' are well-identified, but the 'Way Forward' could offer more innovative or detailed solutions beyond pilot studies and feed-in tariffs. Specific gaps: Lack of specific MMT targets for Green H2 production by 2030, details on the 'Strategic Interventions for Green Hydrogen Transition (SIGHT)' program, and the economic multiplier effect.
Conclusion
Conclude by emphasizing Green Hydrogen's potential to transform India into a global energy leader, aligning with 'Panchamrit' goals and sustainable development.
Diagram Analysis
No diagram present.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mention the specific target of 5 MMT of Green Hydrogen production by 2030 under the NGHM.
- Include the estimated investment of ₹8 lakh crore and the potential for 6 lakh jobs.
- Reference global collaborations or specific technological advancements in electrolyser manufacturing.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Discuss the geopolitical implications of reduced energy imports and enhanced energy sovereignty.
- Link Green Hydrogen to India's commitments under the Paris Agreement and its role in global climate action.
Question 13: The government has been weighing a transition from minimum wage to living wage in recent times. What are the benefits and constraints in the adoption of living wage in India? (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
5.5 / 15
(36.7%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clearly distinguishes between minimum wage and living wage in the introduction, setting the context well.
- Provides a comprehensive list of benefits, including increased purchasing power, savings, human capital improvement, and reduced dependency on subsidies.
- Identifies several critical constraints, such as additional costs to consumers and industries, impact on MSMEs, and multiplicity of wage regimes.
- Offers relevant 'Steps for smooth transition' with committee references (Mahendra Varman Committee) and policy suggestions.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The introduction could more explicitly state the government's rationale for considering this transition.
- While benefits and constraints are listed, a deeper analysis of their magnitude and potential trade-offs is missing.
- The 'Steps for smooth transition' are good but could be more integrated with addressing the identified constraints directly.
Introduction
Start by defining living wage as a human right and an economic necessity, contrasting it with minimum wage and setting the stage for its benefits and challenges.
Body Analysis
The body effectively covers both benefits and constraints. The benefits are well-articulated, linking living wage to improved worker dignity, economic growth, and reduced subsidy burden. The constraints section is also strong, highlighting the burden on industries (especially MSMEs) and the complexity of implementation due to varied living costs and existing wage regimes. However, the analysis could delve deeper into the economic modelling required for setting a living wage in a diverse country like India, and the potential for job losses in certain sectors. The 'Steps for smooth transition' are relevant but could be more detailed on how reforms like the Code on Minimum Wages (2019) specifically facilitate this shift. Specific gaps: Lack of reference to ILO conventions on living wage, the Expert Committee on Wage Code (2019) recommendations, and the challenges of informal sector implementation.
Conclusion
Conclude by emphasizing that a living wage is crucial for inclusive growth and social justice, requiring a balanced approach to implementation for a dignified workforce.
Diagram Analysis
No diagram present.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Reference the recommendations of the Expert Committee on Wage Code (2019) regarding the national floor wage and its calculation.
- Include ILO's definition and principles of a living wage and global best practices.
- Discuss the role of social dialogue and tripartite mechanisms in wage determination.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Link the living wage concept to social justice, reducing income inequality, and achieving SDG 8 (Decent Work and Economic Growth).
- Explore the ethical dimensions of ensuring a dignified life for all workers, especially in the context of India's large informal sector.
Question 14: The Union Budget affects almost every sector of the Indian economy, yet neither the budgetary processes nor the budget policies come under substantial public scrutiny. Do you agree? Justify your answer. (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.5 / 15
(43.3%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- The answer effectively presents arguments for both limited scrutiny and existing deliberation mechanisms.
- Specific points like 'token-cuts' and CAG's post-mortem role are well-identified.
- Mention of Outcome Budget and media's role adds multi-dimensionality.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The initial strong agreement needs more nuance, as the answer then lists several scrutiny instruments.
- Deeper analysis of parliamentary committees' limitations and pre-budget consultation processes is needed.
- Language clarity and grammatical precision require attention.
Introduction
The introduction clearly states agreement and sets the stage. It could briefly acknowledge the complexity of the issue before taking a stance, providing better contextual framing.
Body Analysis
The body logically separates arguments for lack of scrutiny (confidentiality, parliamentary limitations, lack of impact study, post-mortem diagnosis, civil society involvement, technicalities) and existing deliberation instruments (parliamentary discussions, Outcome Budget, surveys, media). However, the 'surveys' point is more about data input than direct scrutiny of budget policies. A specific gap is the lack of detailed discussion on the Departmentally Related Standing Committees' role and their constraints in budget review. The argument structure is clear, but conceptual depth could be enhanced by discussing the effectiveness of existing mechanisms.
Conclusion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the need for greater participation and inclusivity. It could offer a forward-looking policy recommendation, such as strengthening parliamentary oversight or digital platforms for public feedback.
Diagram Analysis
No diagram is present for this question.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Specific reports by PRS Legislative Research on parliamentary budget scrutiny.
- Mention of pre-budget consultations with industry and civil society groups.
- Role of NITI Aayog in policy evaluation and expenditure rationalization.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Link to principles of democratic accountability and transparency in governance.
- Discuss how greater public scrutiny aligns with SDG 16 (Peace, Justice, and Strong Institutions).
Question 15: India has been able to transform itself from a milk deficit country to the world's biggest milk producer, but the productivity of dairy animals in the country remains a concern. Discuss. (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.75 / 15
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Excellent use of precise data (24% global milk, 1777kg/animal/year vs 2700kg world average) to substantiate arguments.
- Comprehensive coverage of reasons for low productivity and specific measures with relevant government schemes (Gokul Mission, KCC, Pashu Sanjeevani).
- The inclusion of the Ashok Dalwai Committee recommendation provides a strong, policy-oriented conclusion.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- While comprehensive, a brief mention of the role of dairy cooperatives (e.g., Amul model) in improving productivity and market access would enhance the answer.
- Minor grammatical errors should be rectified for better language precision.
- Could briefly touch upon the impact of climate change on livestock productivity.
Introduction
The introduction is precise, providing key statistics and directly addressing the question's core premise. It effectively sets the context for the discussion.
Body Analysis
The body demonstrates strong conceptual depth by systematically outlining reasons for low productivity, including intrinsic genetic factors, fodder availability, land for grazing, diseases, infrastructure, and credit access. The multi-dimensionality is evident in the proposed solutions, which cover breed improvement, R&D, infrastructure development, credit access, fodder management, disease control, and technology adoption. The evidence quality is high due to specific scheme mentions. The flowcharts are highly effective in organizing information, making the arguments clear and concise.
Conclusion
The conclusion is impactful, linking livestock productivity to farmer income and citing a relevant committee. It provides a forward vision for policy direction.
Diagram Analysis
The flowcharts effectively organize complex information on reasons for low productivity and measures to improve it, significantly enhancing the understanding and readability of the answer. They are well-structured and clear.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mention of the National Livestock Mission and its sub-missions.
- Role of FPOs (Farmer Producer Organizations) in value chain integration for dairy.
- Specific data on breed improvement programs' success rates.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Link to rural development, poverty alleviation, and food security (SDG 2).
- Discuss the potential for dairy sector growth to address disguised unemployment in agriculture.
Question 16: While climate change is responsible for crop failures, the agricultural sector itself is partly responsible for extreme weather events. Discuss. What strategy has been adopted under National Agriculture Disaster Management Plan to strengthen the resilience of the farming community in India? (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
5.5 / 15
(36.7%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- The answer effectively discusses agriculture's dual role as both a victim and contributor to climate change, providing specific examples for each.
- Good use of data for groundwater depletion and stubble burning's contribution to PM2.5.
- The strategies listed for sustainable agriculture are relevant and include current initiatives like ZBNF and PMKSY.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- A critical factual error regarding '950% of area depended on rainfall' needs immediate correction.
- The second part of the question, specifically on the 'National Agriculture Disaster Management Plan', is not fully addressed; key components like PMFBY, early warning systems, and contingency planning are missing.
- Language precision and grammatical accuracy require improvement.
Introduction
The introduction clearly establishes agriculture's dual role in climate change, providing a strong contextual framing. It directly addresses the question's premise effectively.
Body Analysis
The body logically separates the impacts of climate change on agriculture (extreme weather, erratic rainfall, diseases, sea-level rise) and agriculture's contribution to extreme weather events (groundwater depletion, carbon/methane emissions, soil pollution, eutrophication, stubble burning). However, the discussion on the 'National Agriculture Disaster Management Plan' is generic, listing sustainable agriculture practices rather than specific strategies under that plan. This indicates a conceptual gap in understanding the specific institutional framework and interventions of the stated plan. The factual error regarding rainfall dependency significantly impacts content quality.
Conclusion
The conclusion effectively links agriculture's role to SDG13 and the need for policy interventions. It could be strengthened by reiterating the importance of a comprehensive disaster management plan.
Diagram Analysis
The flowcharts are highly effective in visually organizing the causes and effects, enhancing the clarity and conciseness of the arguments presented in the body. They aid in quick comprehension.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Detailed mention of Pradhan Mantri Fasal Bima Yojana (PMFBY) as a key component of disaster management.
- National Innovations in Climate Resilient Agriculture (NICRA) program.
- Role of IMD and ICAR in providing early warning systems and climate-resilient advisories.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Link to SDG 2 (Zero Hunger) and SDG 13 (Climate Action) for a broader perspective.
- Discuss the federal nature of disaster management and the role of state governments in agricultural resilience.
Question 17: Some regions in India, including Delhi, are highly vulnerable to the impact of earthquakes originating in the Himalayas. Discuss. What institutional measures have been taken to mitigate earthquake losses in India? Do you think there are significant gaps that still exist? (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.5 / 15
(43.3%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Comprehensive coverage of vulnerability factors with specific points like geomorphology and building design.
- Detailed enumeration of institutional measures, including policies, schemes, bodies (NDMA, CDRI), and technology (SAGE, SATARK).
- Clear identification of significant gaps, demonstrating a critical understanding.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- Clarify the percentages for earthquake hazard zones (V, IV, III) as the current representation is slightly confusing.
- Refine the geographical precision regarding Delhi's vulnerability, as the direct link to the Potwar Plateau is less accurate than local fault lines and soil conditions.
- Elaborate on the practical implementation challenges of institutional measures.
Introduction
The introduction effectively sets the context with relevant data on India's vulnerability. Ensure the hazard zone percentages align perfectly with the zones mentioned.
Body Analysis
The body demonstrates a strong understanding of the multi-faceted nature of earthquake vulnerability, institutional responses, and existing gaps. The points on geomorphology, population density, and building design are well-articulated. Institutional measures are comprehensively listed with good examples. However, the connection between Delhi's vulnerability and the Potwar Plateau is geographically imprecise. The discussion on gaps is critical and relevant, covering community participation, institutional oversight, and technology. More recent examples of successful mitigation projects could enhance the evidence quality.
Conclusion
The conclusion is impactful with a relevant quote. Enhance it by adding a forward-looking policy recommendation for integrated disaster risk reduction.
Diagram Analysis
The diagrams effectively illustrate India's earthquake hazard zones and Delhi's geographical context. The hazard map is clear. The Delhi-Himalayas-Potwar Plateau diagram supports the geomorphology point, though the Potwar link needs refinement.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mention specific seismic microzonation studies for Delhi or other vulnerable cities.
- Reference the National Disaster Management Plan (NDMP) 2016 and its specific earthquake-related guidelines.
- Include examples of community-based disaster preparedness initiatives from other states.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Discuss the role of federalism in disaster management, highlighting coordination between central and state agencies.
- Integrate the concept of 'Resilient Infrastructure' and its alignment with SDG 9 (Industry, Innovation, and Infrastructure).
Question 18: Recently, scientists announced net energy gain in nuclear fusion reaction, which is considered as a major scientific breakthrough for the future of clean energy. What are the advantages of nuclear fusion based power generation? What are the limitations in using it to generate electricity at a commercial scale? (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.75 / 15
(45.0%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Clear and concise definition of nuclear fusion, setting a strong foundation.
- Comprehensive list of advantages, highlighting environmental benefits, fuel abundance, and safety compared to fission.
- Detailed and multi-dimensional analysis of limitations, covering technical, economic, and scalability challenges.
- Excellent 'Way Forward' section, demonstrating a holistic understanding of future development.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- Explicitly mention the specific fuel sources (Deuterium and Tritium) for nuclear fusion.
- Detail the technical challenges of plasma confinement and neutron radiation in the limitations section.
- Reference the specific scientific breakthrough (e.g., Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory's National Ignition Facility) for added precision.
Introduction
The introduction is precise and effectively defines nuclear fusion. It perfectly sets the stage for the subsequent discussion on advantages and limitations.
Body Analysis
The body provides an excellent overview of nuclear fusion. Advantages are well-articulated, emphasizing its clean energy potential, reduced waste, and abundant fuel. The limitations section is equally strong, covering scalability, extreme temperature requirements, technological stability, accident risks, and high investment costs. The inclusion of a 'Way Forward' section is a significant value addition, suggesting international collaboration (ITER), R&D, and impact assessments. The arguments are logical and demonstrate conceptual depth.
Conclusion
The conclusion effectively links nuclear fusion to global climate goals. Strengthen it by briefly reiterating its transformative potential for energy security.
Diagram Analysis
No diagram was provided for this question.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mention the specific challenges of tritium breeding and handling.
- Discuss the role of public-private partnerships in funding large-scale fusion research projects.
- Compare the energy density of fusion fuels with conventional fuels.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Connect nuclear fusion's potential to India's energy security strategy and its 'Net Zero' commitments.
- Discuss the ethical implications of developing such high-stakes technology and the need for international governance frameworks.
Question 19: Keeping in view the recent amendment, examine the efficacy of the Prevention of Money Laundering Act, 2002, in tackling the menace of money laundering in India. (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.5 / 15
(43.3%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- Strong contextual introduction with FATF estimates on money laundering's global impact.
- Accurate identification of key amendments to PMLA, such as enhanced powers for ED, arrest without warrant, and burden of proof on the accused.
- Excellent inclusion of 'additional mechanisms' beyond PMLA, covering intelligence, international cooperation (FATF), and technology (AI/ML, blockchain).
- Effective use of a diagram to illustrate the stages of money laundering.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- Explicitly mention the specific 'recent amendment' (e.g., 2019 amendments) and the Supreme Court's 2022 judgment (Vijay Madanlal Choudhary case) upholding its provisions.
- Clarify the 'Emergency Information Report' point, referring to the Enforcement Case Information Report (ECIR) as an internal document.
- Briefly discuss the challenges or criticisms regarding the PMLA's implementation, such as low conviction rates or potential for misuse.
Introduction
The introduction effectively contextualizes money laundering with relevant data. It sets a strong foundation for examining PMLA's efficacy.
Body Analysis
The body effectively examines the efficacy of PMLA by highlighting crucial amendments that empower the Enforcement Directorate, shift the burden of proof, and facilitate asset confiscation. The diagram illustrating the stages of money laundering is highly effective. The section on 'additional mechanisms' is a significant strength, demonstrating a comprehensive understanding of the broader anti-money laundering ecosystem, including FIU-IND, FATF, and technological interventions. However, the answer misses the critical Supreme Court judgment that validated these amendments, which is central to PMLA's current efficacy.
Conclusion
The conclusion provides a good summary and a forward-looking statement. Enhance it by emphasizing the need for continuous adaptation to evolving money laundering techniques.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram clearly illustrates the three stages of money laundering (Placement, Layering, Integrating), significantly enhancing the understanding of the concept.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Reference the Financial Action Task Force (FATF) recommendations and India's compliance status.
- Mention the role of the Central Economic Intelligence Bureau (CEIB) in coordinating intelligence.
- Discuss the challenges of cross-border money laundering and the need for Mutual Legal Assistance Treaties (MLATs).
UPSC Enhancements:
- Analyze the PMLA's role in combating terror financing and its implications for national security.
- Discuss the ethical considerations surrounding the extensive powers granted to enforcement agencies under PMLA and the balance with individual rights.
Question 20: Discuss the security threats present in the Indian Ocean Region (IOR), which have a direct bearing on India's maritime border interests. Suggest a robust strategy to deal with these threats. (Answer in 250 words)
Max Marks: 15
6.25 / 15
(41.7%)
Strengths
Key Strengths:
- The answer effectively identifies several pertinent security threats in the IOR, such as coastal vulnerability, piracy, and choke points.
- The strategy section is robust, offering a multi-faceted approach with specific and relevant examples like IFC-IOR, MILAN exercises, and Sagar Suraksha Dal.
Areas of Improvement
Areas to Improve:
- The distinction between internal weaknesses (e.g., 'multiple agencies') and external threats needs to be clearer.
- The analysis of geopolitical threats, particularly regarding China's presence, could be more nuanced and precise.
- The conclusion lacks a forward-looking perspective or concrete policy recommendations.
Introduction
The introduction effectively establishes the economic significance of the IOR for India, directly addressing the question's contextual framing. It sets a good foundation for the subsequent discussion.
Body Analysis
The body logically separates threats and strategies. Threat identification is largely accurate, though the 'multiple agencies' point is an internal governance issue rather than an external threat. The discussion on China's military bases near islands is vague; specifying power projection or encirclement would enhance precision. The strategy section is strong, providing specific institutional, diplomatic, and community-level measures. However, deeper analysis of non-traditional threats like IUU fishing or maritime terrorism beyond 26/11 is missing. Conceptual depth could be improved by linking threats to broader geopolitical shifts.
Conclusion
The conclusion should move beyond reiterating importance to offer a forward-looking vision, perhaps suggesting future policy directions or the role of India as a net security provider in the IOR.
Diagram Analysis
The diagram offers a basic visual representation of some threats but lacks detail. It could be enhanced by clearly marking specific choke points, piracy hotspots, or areas of geopolitical contestation for better understanding.
Value Addition Opportunities
Missed Opportunities:
- Mentioning India's SAGAR (Security and Growth for All in the Region) doctrine as an overarching strategic framework.
- Including specific data on Illegal, Unreported, and Unregulated (IUU) fishing or drug trafficking routes.
- Referencing the Indian Maritime Security Strategy 2015 or recent policy updates.
UPSC Enhancements:
- Connecting IOR security challenges to SDG 14 (Life Below Water) and its implications for sustainable development.
- Discussing the role of maritime diplomacy and soft power in fostering regional trust and cooperation.
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